2008/02/08 Not favorite comment
[Original Japanese review
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[Bad point] How can you draw a cartoon that makes humans who read so far unpleasant .... The author seems to have an impression that it constitutes a work only by his hobby taste. Everything in development is haphazard and the world view is also mixed. I would like to think about the readers' feelings and make works. Furthermore, I think that it is probably the taste of the author, but I think it seems that the story is biased toward the body side more than necessary .... Especially when the story is not progressing, it is unpleasant even if it shows only depressed depiction of the body. Also, regardless of the hero, I think that my body's behavior is too small. Would not it have been better if you chose shoji as the hero in this case. (I think that is also a hobby of the author ... ...) Although it is more perfect personal opinion than ever, I think that it would be better for the author to have affection for the character a little more. The character appearing in this work has too many gloomy facial expressions. Besides, if you say that you will die if you do not do something, what you are worrying about is too small .... Somehow they all boast unhappily, and each seems to be ecstatic with becoming a tragic hero, a heroine .... Is the affection of the author, Anata insulting cartoon girls to make them cute?
I am quite clear